The crux of your writing whilst appearing reasonable in the beginning, did not really settle perfectly with me after some time. Somewhere within the paragraphs you actually managed to make me a believer unfortunately just for a while. I however have a problem with your jumps in logic and you might do well to fill in all those gaps. If you can accomplish that, I will undoubtedly be fascinated.
The only criticism I have is that you took the medieval viewpoint of the king and the wealthy and didnt factor in the activities of the elected vote-buying Congress of the United States. They were at LEAST as responsible for the loosening of borrowing requirements as the President and the Fed Chairman. They sold their seats in congress to people who think like medieval peasants who deserve to be given something more than they are already getting. That would be financing for affordable housing, the siren call of gents like Barney Frank and Christopher Dodd. They, along with the machinery that supported them, should have been factored in along with the already covered causes.
The crux of your writing whilst appearing reasonable in the beginning, did not really settle perfectly with me after some time. Somewhere within the paragraphs you actually managed to make me a believer unfortunately just for a while. I however have a problem with your jumps in logic and you might do well to fill in all those gaps. If you can accomplish that, I will undoubtedly be fascinated.
The only criticism I have is that you took the medieval viewpoint of the king and the wealthy and didnt factor in the activities of the elected vote-buying Congress of the United States. They were at LEAST as responsible for the loosening of borrowing requirements as the President and the Fed Chairman. They sold their seats in congress to people who think like medieval peasants who deserve to be given something more than they are already getting. That would be financing for affordable housing, the siren call of gents like Barney Frank and Christopher Dodd. They, along with the machinery that supported them, should have been factored in along with the already covered causes.